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yagathai ([personal profile] yagathai) wrote2009-08-18 07:25 pm
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Seventy Two Letters

So people love Ted Chiang's work, and that's fine. I have certainly enjoyed those of his stories that I have read, including his 2000 Sidewise-winning short Seventy Two Letters (available free online, linked from his Wikipedia article). That being said, I re-read it recently and it struck me as... well, very Michael Crichtony (or sideways-Crichtony, as the case may be). There's an excellent speculative premise*, extrapolated brilliantly, draped over a skeleton of a plot and populated with paper-thin stock characters spouting what is at times painfully wooden dialogue.

I think that the first time I read I was too caught up in the "gee-whiz!" to notice, but now that I look at it again... once you get past the gee-whiz, and dig beneath the delicious alternate history crust... there just isn't much there.

One school of criticism says that in order for a genre fiction to be any good, it still has to be good even after you strip away the genre elements. Crap with ray guns or unicorns bolted on (or ray guns AND unicorns bolted on) is still crap, or so proponents of that school claim, and the only thing worse is ray guns or unicorns with crap bolted on. I like to call that a "LOOK HOW COOL MY DRAGONS ARE!" story, though today you might replace dragons with vampires.

Seventy Two Words fails on that level rather spectacularly, as it is most definitely a great speculative hook with some perfunctory story attached. Despite that, I still like it a lot.

Here's the question: can something still be a good science fiction story if it's excellent science fiction, but a terrible story? In other words, is it possible that Chiang's dragon in this story is SO FUCKING COOL!!! that it can make up for all the story's deficiencies?

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*What if the physical sciences sprang from gnostic/kabbalistic sorcery instead of alchemy? What if the name of the thing really was the thing?

You know, now that I think of it I wish someone (me, for example) had brought this story up at the "Is Darwin Too Good For SF" panel at ReaderCon this year, since it excellently postulates an extremely non-Darwinian model of evolution.

[identity profile] kylecassidy.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
if you take the space ships and jawas out of star wars, what do you have left?

[identity profile] emilytheslayer.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
A really whiny-ass farm boy.

[identity profile] sinboy.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Take him out too. And Leia. The whole thing should just be a Han And Chewie Road Movie.

[identity profile] emilytheslayer.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
I can totally get behind this.

[identity profile] kylecassidy.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
"left hand turn, chewie"

[identity profile] elsewhereangel.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 05:16 am (UTC)(link)
I would watch that.

[identity profile] yagathai.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
A bog-standard farmboy-turned-warrior-hero story bolted on to an unrepentant Akira Kurosawa remake?

[identity profile] kylecassidy.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
exactly. does that answer your question?

[identity profile] yagathai.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 04:01 am (UTC)(link)
No? I mean, Star Wars is fun, but I don't know if I could call it good. Alien vs Predator is fun too, but it ain't winning no Oscars, you know?

[identity profile] kylecassidy.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
star wars won like seven oscars dude. and if you count the franchise? you could sink a ship by loading statues on it. GEORGE LUCAS OWNS A SOLID GOLD ISLAND WHERE THE BEACH SAND IS MADE OF TINY DIAMONDS (which are like the eyes of a cat in the black and blue.)

[identity profile] yagathai.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
Something is coming for you.

LOOK OUT!
Edited 2009-08-19 04:09 (UTC)

[identity profile] kylecassidy.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 04:14 am (UTC)(link)
is it Return of the Jedi Lea?

[identity profile] yagathai.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
No, it's modern-day Carrie Fisher:

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